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(Contains: violence/gore and strong language)
I
I see you

“Gamzee?” my eyes widen as I hear her voice. A grin spreading across my face as I stand. My hands are covered with the miraculous olive blood. The ear-piercing scream rips through my ears as she sees me standing over her dead friend.

Head so dulled

“Hey, sis..” I smile at her. My motherfucking matesprite. Fear shines in her beautiful eyes. “How many...?” her voice is only awhisper. I wonder.. I wonder what her blood looks like.. “You’re the only motherfucker left, sis.” I grin, holding up my club as I pin her against the wall. I lean in and inhale her scent, a motherfucking miracle. I’ll miss that scent.

You can’t hide

She pushes me away, running out of the room. My smile fades away as I hear her scream.

I will wait
Underneath

I let out a low growl and walk into the next room. She is admiring my artwork. Terezi is pinned to the wall by her motherfucking dragon cane. One blade is in her chest and the other is in her motherfucking head. Her teal blood, dripping down to the floor. My matesprit is covering her mouth in shock.

I
I keep you

“Gamzee...” she looks up at me. (b/c) tears in her eyes. I let my club drop to the floor with a hollow thud.

Where you lie
Where you doubt

She wants to believe I won’t hurt her. Maybe I want to believe that too. But I know it’s a lie. A motherfucking lie. I move towards her. She doesn’t even try to run.

You can be
Who you are

Tears stain her face. A miracle of a face, stained by tears. My hand wraps around her neck and I pull her up, slamming her against the wall. More motherfucking tears.

You
Will convince

“Gamzee..?” Her voice is meek, but clear in my motherfucking thinkpan. My grip around her neck becomes tighter, my nails digging in the delicate skin and drawing (b/c) blood.

Yourself that
You have grown

“Gamzee, please.. this isn’t you..” Her voice is shakey. I wonder if she hates me now.

But I know
You are near

“Gamzee.. You’re crying..” She reaches for me, wiping away my motherfucking tears. “You’re hurt, Gamgam.. we need to treat your wounds..” My wounds? She can’t be serious.

I
Have no reason

My grip on her begins to loosen and she lets out a sigh of relief.

To do more
Than destroy

My grip tightens again and I slam her head back against the wall. She gasps and winces in pain. “Shut the fuck up. YOU DON’T CARE ABOUT ME!” More tears stream down her motherfucking face.

What you dream
And convince

She has no fear in her eyes. She has accepted her fate. She grimces at the pain of my nails in her skin. But she isn’t afraid.

What you fear
Isn’t real

“Gamzee.. You were my mirical..” my eyes widen at her words and i wrap my other hand around her neck.

I’m right here
Hide and Seek

She smiles weakly at me. I pull her forward before slaming her as hard as I can against the wall. “Flushed for you..” Her last motherfucking words were spoken right before her death. Her blood colors the walls, her body goes limp, I let her go and her body falls in a motherfuck pool of her beautiful blood. “...flushed for you too...”

You have always
Been asleep..
I wrote a sadstuck guys.. I was listining to this song called "Hide and Seek" by Flipping the Pig with my friend and she said it made her think of sober Gamzee. She requested this story, so I gave it a shot. I know it isn't very descriptive, its supposed to be like that.

Homestuck belongs to Hussie!
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:iconangel434:
Angel434 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
the feels Gambro
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ChaliesChronicles Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...Love hurts u.u
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ZlayZlay Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student General Artist
I-I-HJFGDSGHJFDDrfghjmngfdsexfghy7654edfcvbnGamzeeWhyyyyjhtdfhjktgdcv
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black-butler362 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Interface Designer
The nickname gamgam I dont like it because I call my grandma gamgam...
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:iconjust-a-little-love:
just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...okay sorry bro
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pacificislandlove23 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Writer
listening to 'little clown, troubling clown' and reading this....
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MochiFace Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
OH MY GOG WHY DID I LISTEN TO "THIS IS GOSPEL" WHILE READING THIS?! MADE ME CRY SO HARD!
AND I JUST READ IT AGAIN WITH THE FLIPPING MUSIC! MADE ME CRY EVEN HARDER!
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xxxXMitunaLoverXxxx Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
*sits in corner crying* I love this story a-so m-much it hurts...
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconaawplz: uh... um.. sorry? Uh...
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Pikamuffins Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
you... you brokoro my kokoro... TTnTT
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Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
Kokoro means heart, right?
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Pikamuffins Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
Yes. :33
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Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
XD yay! i'm japanese noe. :iconmegustaplz:
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Creepypasta143 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
You just took my f33l2 and ripped them apart my f33l2 8ye the way awe2ome 2tory it2 purrfect
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww sorry ;~; thanks though
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Creepypasta143 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Welcome purresure watching :33
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RavenBraginski Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why does reader always call him GamGam no matter the author
YAY I SEEM TO HAVE STAYED UP ALL NIGHT READING SADSTUCK AGAIN
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Because Gamgam is the reader's nickname for him. Its a cute nickname.
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Jacy-Minecraft Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
My friend doesn't know what homestuck is and I showed her this and her reaction was: "Holy sh!t…"
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I... am... the example *feeling like a bazaars*
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Jacy-Minecraft Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
xD
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Ilikethemoomoos Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
I don't know what to do. Should I cry or should I be like "what the fuck?" This story was soooo good ^-^ your an amazing writer
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Either reaction works for me. Haha, thank you for the compliment.
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FishyTime96 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Artist
Really Sad Emoticon - TT.TT :criesthrust: Crying RYKA cry 
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Bobbiebear523 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
my feels.... my feels... :'(
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AlexTheRotten Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O wow...
That was really good!!! I enjoyed it ^.^
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:iconjust-a-little-love:
just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^.^
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AlexTheRotten Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh your welcome dude x)
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Fernan465 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
:'( my feels...their just...idk anymore (I really need to stop reading sadstuck. This is very good tho :) )
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black-butler362 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Interface Designer
I feel the same... :( ( and I also need to stop reading the sad stucks...I think im out of tears)
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NinjaGirlKikio Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great story, but i think you went overboard with the word "motherfucker" <XP
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think so, thanks for the feedback though ^.^
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NinjaGirlKikio Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
are you sure?

cos i feel as if you used it in the wrong places

i know gamzee uses "motherfucker" when speaking to someone, or describing an object

but i still feel as if you used a little bit too much of it <XP

i think you need to read it out loud to see in my opinion

[hope i dont sound bothering to you ):>, i just like to help my fellow deviantart writers with their stories]
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I don't want to re-write it though. I'm still learning how to write Gamzee so its not perfect.
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NinjaGirlKikio Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i see

well, if you dont want to re-write, but you want it fixed

you can always look for an editor to help you with that
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AlRiGhT, bRo, FiXeD iT
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NinjaGirlKikio Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really?

wwell you didnt havve too <XP

[kind of feel bad noww that i bothered you about it constantly]

but i'll be "shore" to check it out wwhen i can find the time (:
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NaH, dOn'T wOrRy AbOuT iT
I aLwAyS aIm To ImPrOvE
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stridersgonnastride4 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013   Writer
T-T that was awesome
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alicemoonlight123 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GAMZEE! DX I WILL ALWAYS FORGIVE YOU!
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Bbord Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Student Writer
All my feels...have down the drain... :iconcryforeverplz:
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xXCielaPhantomhiveXx Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Artist
This was amazing!
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh you! X3
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Otencia Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
;n;


ima

go cry now



*flies off*
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:
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spiritcreator Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
IM ALREADY DRAWING A SHITTY SADSTUCK WHY MUST I READ THIS. WHY. OH GOD.
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconshooshpapplz:
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spiritcreator Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*cries in corner*
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just-a-little-love Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh. um... *panics* um.. uh...*huggles tightly*
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spiritcreator Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
D':
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